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Ouch, that's cruel!

She doesn't know if it's important or not. the kid keeps saying no. she keeps increasing the offer even though he doesn't want to and eventually forces him by raising it to a number he can't resist. she doesn't know if anything will go wrong or not. she doesn't understand this world of wizards but her teacher that knows this world that is very cutthroat and can easily lead to the death of people has specifically said "Don't do this for a short period. it's really bad right now" and she STUPIDLY doesn't just disregard it herself, she repeatedly tries to bribe her fellow student to do it too. This is a world where people's lives are dirt cheap and you want to use the standards of someone claiming moral high-ground in a developed nation in our world? That won't do!!!

This is just absurd.

instant turn-off. I'd leave immediately.

Too specific and too demanding. This is too narrative, lacking system logic.

Bad grammar.

The most common cases of scurvy today has nothing to do with seafaring. It's just a daily life whilst lacking vitamins from your diet!

At this point, WHY ISN'T THE BUTLER DEAD?! TRAITOROUS BASTARD!!! I just don't believe she is royal when she can't handle her servants. A royal family like this would be overthrown.

The only place I'd let my guests sit at such poor arrangement would be in places where it's the best I can offer, like my grandfather's old hut. If I'm hosting a proper event, that's absolutely unacceptable for my guests! I couldn't care less for my own, but I have to care for my guests as a host. I hate the whole trope with noblemen treating commoner guests poorly. If I saw a fellow nobleman treating ANYONE poorly at an event, I'd blacklist that nobleman. Events are where we show off our kindest and best selves so to see such terrible behaviour when at your best...

"Make" is a name here. A terrible name and easily forgotten as well as the cause of many confusions/immersion breaking.