Sir_GENESIS
A handsome, cool looking young man.
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A word of advice to the author, your chapter length is too short. The excitement I once had reading this is gone now, it's just isn't the same anymore like when I first read this. It was good for binge but for reading this once a day, it's just boring so, I decided to wait for it to stack chapters. Though no powers tones for now till there is more chapters.
M this is my review after reading for a while now, your story has a great start. With smooth grammar with few little mistakes when using proper words, all is good until you dicided to go with the common trope, 8 of 10 one piece fan fics out there go with having some of luffys crew into theirs. Turning this great fic into that of a meh, or barely good enaugh. If you want to have something that is popular, atleast go with something original. One piece world's is big and diverse. That's all.
My review till chap 1320. The trope of him getting girls are now being repitetive. The story is getting boring. The grammar needs some more work. The love romance department now makes me cringe. The saving grace is how they go into other stories. The group chat characters are now almost forgotten especially the males. You should end this novel and create a new one again. This has become to bland for my taste so I'm dropping this and wait for a new novel. Thanks for the chapters BTW.