Julio_Santoyo

I have no issues if it got resolve as long it made sense. just the 180 turn over doormat MC after the beginning build up was a let down. Future devel9pments just confirms it.

Started out decent but than whole cringe beta mc later on kind of pullling down. Doesn't help its one of those slave to system stories with goals being main than having actual social connections passing it out to Bell kind of self ntr in a way? Might be too soon judge but so far chapters feel that way. Honestly if his going be such a self c---blocker should have just made him a female as storys penalty. Not translators fault but original authors idiocy. Hoping proven wrong later later on once have good amount chapters but for the moment ill judt leave it back log.

Started out good than slowly kind of going downhill plus mc being sort of a beta ain't helping. Had potentiall but this slave to system bs hence no supposed connections, having no intention to romance besides being cringe beta of a male kind of killing the story. Original author truly over explains things not requiring multiple paragraphs is annoying. Of course not translators fault but so far its just going downhill. Ill come back later on see if anything changes besides being a beta, garbage system slave as excuse no possible connections.

Had potentiall but this slave to system bs hence no supposed connections, having no intention to romance besides being cringe beta of a male kind of killing the story. Dude literally over explains crap that does not need 2-3 paragraphs about an activity as simple as eating. Though I know its not translator but original authors faults.

Unfortunately that did not last long somewhat around somewhere after chapter 15+. Spoiler, he literally starts being dumb simp. Kills any past experience literally.

Id agree if author didn't follow cannon, but he does. Id shut my mouth if not everything had an obvious excuse. Still somehow ends up cannon so any changes seem wasted.

Su personaje se fue a lo idiota. Su acciones no dan rason y cual quier cisa que paso en pasado como el traicion de Scathac se gue a la basura. Se hizo un perro simp facilmente.

Right my bad still same simp sobfar up to Ch 17

It doesnt get better at least so far around Chapter 10. Mc a doormat simp type. Any meaningful developments goes straight garbage to simp. Starts seemingly well goals than any past grievance gone back to simping on Shishou, just disgusting. Might be wrong change future but so far went down hill

If it hasnt being obvious, the mc is a moron now. Story started great but as soon he bendover simp for Scathac easily after bs he went through. If it had being done right over story developing I or most probably wouldnt complain much. As soon reach Hostess of Fertily MC is a doormat.