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Pratik_Guni1dComentouHow many times are you going to say Experienced actor, seasoned actor ryan gosling, adrian Whenever they are mentioned that title is with them We know it, how many times are you going to repeat it. So , frustrating
Among the audience, renowned actors like Ryan Gosling, Adrian Brody, and Jennifer Lawrence stood and applauded. Their gaze turned towards the front, acknowledging the film's team: Lucas Knight, the director, cast, and even Aron Ralston himself.- Pratik_Guni2dComentou
40 days is short?! In my country having vaccation of 30 day is considered a rarity Most of school just give 18 day vaccation And that is the biggest vaccation we will ever get through out the year What is the average vaccation duration abroad?
Totsuki Academy has a different summer break than most schools, lasting only a week, while most schools in Japan have around 40 days. - Pratik_Guni3dComentou
Is that not the same or am I dumb One determines how good the physic will be while the determines how strong it will be (Does not good physic determine how strong the body is)
Physical potential determines how strong your physique will be in the future.] - Pratik_Guni1mthRespondeu a Draekai
I’m staying because of this
Hands? Check. Smooth, long legs? Check. Long white hair that reaches my lower back? Check. Vagina? Also check. Butt? Bubble. Boobs? Nice, firm F cups and very squeezable. - Pratik_Guni1mthComentouCh 223 Chapter 223: Pre-Halloween.
- Pratik_Guni2mthComentou
This is such bs bro. How did she see his potential? What did mc do to garner such interest in his potential ? This feels so forced
"Shadow Guard, watch that kid for me. He might have potential." Yafei said while storing the panties back in her storage ring. - Pratik_Guni2mthComentou
The problem with this story is that, The scene are really stretched like really stretched it's like you are trying to milk every single words you can to make the chapters longer For eg the conversation with miach, a lot of things were unnecessary like retelling every thing which we already know which makes the pace of the story sooo slow along with your release schedule it's hetic. For a story to be interesting there should not be any retelling of what has happened in the story which you have already told/took the time to tell it. It wastes the readers time and also occupies your book's portion which you could have used for other things I can see that you are using show not tell but you are using it too much there are times where you should slack and just tell not show which will improve the pacing problem There are times where you should just tell The story is good but I hope you will fix this problem which will make your book a lot better
Ch 19 The Day Is Almost Over, Hang In TheredetailOh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!Anime e quadrinhos · RikuKage - Pratik_Guni5mthRespondeu a Pratik_Guni
Retire*
Renji chimed in, "An ex-Shinigami who landed here once told us Fifth level lets you use intermediate-level Kido spells. In squads, you'd be ranked as Fifth or Sixth seat officers. Sixth level is like a Vice-Captain or Third Seat strength. I got to Fourth level with that Shinigami's help." - Pratik_Guni5mthComentou
Shinigami can’t reture,can they?
Renji chimed in, "An ex-Shinigami who landed here once told us Fifth level lets you use intermediate-level Kido spells. In squads, you'd be ranked as Fifth or Sixth seat officers. Sixth level is like a Vice-Captain or Third Seat strength. I got to Fourth level with that Shinigami's help." - Pratik_Guni5mthComentouCh 53 Chapter 49: He's Dead.
- Pratik_Guni6mthComentou
This smoking being cool is soo overrated, *look at me I’m 10-14 years old I’m soo cool* This is just a pathetic excuse for coolness
"I never thought I'd still be afraid of death," I mused self-deprecatingly, taking a deep drag of tobacco smoke that reached my lungs and then spiraled out in two plumes from my nostrils. - Pratik_Guni7mthComentouCh 16 Frost and Fury
- Pratik_Guni8mthRespondeu a RonaldMcDongald
I didn’t know it I thought it was barry
He turned out to be Flash? - Pratik_Guni8mthRespondeu a The_Puffer
What previous info?
He turned out to be Flash? - Pratik_Guni10mthComentou
How convenient....😏
"Huh?! It really... chose me!" - Pratik_Guni11mthComentou
Let's go!!!!😈
Goddess of Ice: Going for One Piece - Pratik_Guni1yrRespondeu a whitethief274
I can vouch it I have been binging the fic and i like it I dont think there is anything wrong
Hopefully, I'd get proper responses other than the fic is slow and the chat group took 11 chapters to be introduce, I am sure you understand that these alone aren't strong enough points to get a 1 star rating. - Pratik_Guni1yrComentou
Who knows?
Now forget all that and on a serious note let me ask you guys this --- " NOBODY " has ordered many new packs of cigarettes for himself before -- So the delivery dude is asking me for the address -- Where should I send them. - Pratik_Guni1yrComentou
A paper doesn't break
Everyone turned to face Alduin as the sound of shattering glass echoed throughout the room. It turned out to be a piece of paper that had broken, and its fragments lay scattered on the floor, which was already strange because the paper was supposed to be made of regular paper. - Pratik_Guni1yrComentouCh 133 Setting the Stage