Ownin

Excellent story so far, I love reading these kind of development type novels. Hope you keep the updates coming!

Amazing story so far! I can't wait to see him travelling to other worlds, hopefully soon! Keep up the great work!

Excellent writing! By far one of my favorite HP novels. You brought a whole new aspect to HP too which makes it even better. Keep up the great writing!

This rewrite is so much better for the flow of the story. Great job!

Amazing story so far, keep up the great work! By far the best teen wolf story I've read so far. 5/5

Really love the story so far! Keep up the great work! Although the English isn't the greatest, It really doesn't take too much away from the story. 5/5

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Story is great so far, I just hope you continue the story. It gets really old when new good stories come out and stop after like 5-10 chapters.

The Glock 17 doesn't have a normal safety... It's a trigger safety...

So wait, did he just get harry potter's wand?...