Godemalex

Hi, no offense, just my formed opinion: at some point, for some reason, the interest in the story disappeared. The chapters turned into simply repeating the existing plot, whereas in the beginning, there was a mysterious atmosphere, a temple of knowledge. In the end, we got an ordinary illusionist who no longer evokes that sense of awe, just a new character who ‘follows the existing plot.’ I want to clarify right away that I’m not saying the story is bad. It’s just that the beginning was so captivating that the emotional downturn, which is always necessary, was too deep. As a result, the further development has turned into the mundane influence of the hero on the already existing plot, just with his involvement. The story will stay in my library; I just want to wait for more chapters, and maybe, over time, the spark will reignite.

Can you give the original name for viewing on the Internet?

3. Bleach

Question. According to another story that follows the chronology in your other fanfic, we can learn that Aerion will die thereby breaking his word to Reinira, and in fact you have already made a spoiler for the ending of this story. It's just that if this is the ending, then what's the point of continuing this particular story?

I will add to my comment. The story is good, but the nuances described above reduce its appeal for me.

This is not why you wait a week. The main character is heavily nerfed, the difference between the original Utakata is zero, why repeat what was already written and depicted much better. The last few episodes make me wonder if there's any point in continuing to wait every week if they're about normal character development that could have been done in a couple of chapters instead of being stretched straight into a separate chapter. If this situation will be like this next week as well, then it means that fate is not visible, which is sad (((

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Just 3 girls, not more!

Not more, just 3!

Really, I can’t read this story. First 20 chapters were good, but then… The story became not interesting, half of wrote chapters was about what? About school that doesn’t need for demon. I can’t understand that part, when some people have a good concept and have a good start, but then destroy everything. So, thanks, but no.