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le_shounenboi

le_shounenboi

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2020-10-07 UnidoGlobal
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  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
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    I'm not much into vampire stories but this is some amazing stuff. The writing quality is superb. Chapters updates are stable so that's a plus point for you.The characters are very descriptive as well and they each have their own set of personalities that could easily portray to the readers. The narratives are clear and cutting edge. World background is written well. All the best!!!

  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
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    Since I have my exams coming up this story will be on hiatus indefinitely. Sorry for the inconvenience. For those who haven't read this story please do give it a read and leave me some feedback. Thank you!!!

  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
    Respondeu a Lexi_Roberson

    Cool, I Will check out your novel.

  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
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    First of all, that's an amazing cover, so great job with that. The story is really good with some beautiful descriptions however I just had one problem which was the use of a single paragraph of the entire chapter. Maybe the use of multiple paragraphs will be pleasing to your readers.

  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
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    Getting thrown into a world of werewolves and vampires — not my favorite genre but this story has been written really well with some amazing description to back it. This book has a unique style of writing. The characters are depicted vividly and the drama between them is strong and very enjoyable. I also love its sprinkles of fantasy, the lycan and vampire is a powerful twist to the story. All the best!!!

  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
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    The story is well planned, the author knows what he is doing. A really interesting concept, it can definitely grow into a great story. All the best author added the book to my collection.

  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
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    So part 1 of the Sweet Revenge Arc has already ended in the story. The second part of this arc will start ten days from now. Please do give it a read. The story has been very merry until now but it's definitely going to get darker. I really want to write the ending of this arc asap but I have to first create a plot for the main antagonist of this arc...what a drag 😩. Thanks for all the reviews and please continue reading Wanted Wanters.

  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
    Respondeu a Gerald_018

    Ya I heard about it.

  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
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    Not much into werewolves or zombies but boy the first chapter was really interesting. The author's narration is excellent and I love the protagonist. I usually don't read too many stories with female leads but I loved this one. All the best!!! Added to my collection.

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • le_shounenboi
    le_shounenboi4 years ago
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    A good and enjoyable story. My grammar is atrocious so I cannot comment. Your writing style is great and the pacing is good. I'll review the work again once more chapters are added all the best!!!