Joaquin_Mora

N°3

He was very interesting but when he destroyed Konoha and started enjoying life they gave him a personality that I don't like. well that's all but I have to put more words

N°3

The story is interesting but I don't like the writing style. No tengo nada mas que escribir. .........................................................

It has many things that I don't like, you can find it in the other ratings but the most annoying thing is that although it was interesting at first, it becomes very repetitive and the character becomes stupid very quickly.

The best reason is that she is the mother of the protagonist, he had 2 options: let her die and Ichigo not know him or save her and Ichigo THE PROTAGONIST was indebted to him.

Me encanto, la verdad que esta muy bien traducido y la historia de por si es muy entretenida aparte de que tiene algunas frases interesantes que se nota la traduccion.

What is tftc?

1

I really like the character and the fact that he feels alone along with his negative thoughts gives him good development in my opinion, what would be good is for him to have small flashbacks within the chapters because in my opinion it is a little late for him have entire chapters dedicated to what happened before. If you do flashbacks you have to be careful that they are not annoying but that is the only thing I can tell you since I am not a writer.