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Not exactly It doesn't work like that. It's like taking a vaccine. You'll only get resistance to certain diseases or viruses but it doesn't give you anything like super strength etc. Same logic applies here.

Very good observation There's a reason for it but it would be a major spoiler if I told you. Thanks for reading also!!

I didn't believe anyone was this far in, assuming you are😧 Thanks for reading!!

I like the premise of the story. The opening scene really had me with the acting. Synopsis: It's a great and straightforward synopsis that I can not complain about. It's done well and gives the reader enough detail to understand what they're getting into. Great Job! Writing Quality: For someone who doesn't speak English, this is great. I didn't see any grammatical errors and the book felt easy to read. On a platform like this, you go in expecting tons of errors so it's refreshing when a book can deliver without grammatical mistakes! Awesome job! Story Development: The groundwork is there. The characters are interesting. The slow build-up is taking place. The interactions are attention-grabbing and make the reader curious. The only thing I can say is bravo! Keep at it and the story will surely continue to grow!! Character Designs: I'm happy you included the character designs. The last 2 romance books I went through didn't detail their characters which left me quite confused. I know it's down to preference but I believe in Romances, the characters need to be detailed to give insight into who they are and what makes them physically attractive/unattractive. Great job with the descriptions!! Overall: Amazing job, author! You've received the rare 5/5 from me so congratulations and well done! Keep up the amazing work and I'm sure you'll do great. Don't give up!

Thanks for the review I must ask what error you noticed though?

The book has an interesting take. I must say that it grabbed my attention in the very first chapter. The MC is certainly unique and not one that most people try to write these days. I like his dark outlook on life. Synopsis: Honestly, this could have been done better. While reading it, I wasn't sure what it was trying to convey. I felt a little confused and so I dived into the story without knowing what to expect. Writing Quality: This is very good. In terms of punctuations, vocabulary, etc, it is done very well. I saw a few instances where capitalizations were missing but those might have just slipped past the author. I'd recommend using Grammarly to catch those hidden errors. Story Development: Again, I like the MC. The story seems interesting and unique. It feels like a breath of fresh air when compared to most of the "copy and paste" stories I've seen. I can get behind the author with this one in regards to pacing and quality. World Background/Building: Not bad. Few more words could be used to describe the setting of the world but that's fine. This book is mixed with normal and abnormal things which I like. Overall: The story seems pretty solid so far. I like the direction and build-up around the character and his attitude. I am the type of person who loves character development though, so while I like the "Nigerian Prince" so far, a change in his attitude, later on, would do him justice. Good job and keep up the good work author!

The story feels like a smooth read. It's direct and fortunately not confusing. It gets to the point and delivers. Synopsis: Great synopsis, though a little lengthy. It feels more like a prologue than a description of what the book is about but that's fine. Writing Quality: Great all round. Nothing to criticize here. Vocabulary, grammar, punctuations, etc, are all on point. This is what makes the book feel so smooth to read. I only saw one part where a single comma was missing but that's nothing to pick at. Story Development: The premise is nice and it's quite captivating. It doesn't feel boring and the pacing is just right. The character's personalities are quite interesting to observe when they interact with one another. Great job here. Character Design: Marked the author real hard here. Though it's a preference for describing how characters look, for a romance book, I always believe that the characters should be described. It makes it more interesting and allows the reader to actually visualize the characters better, as well as gain a better understanding of a few things the love interests like about one another. Overall: There wasn't much to criticize. The book feels relaxing to read and it can certainly do well. I wish the author all the best! Keep at it and this book can make it to the top!!

The book is not too bad so far but there is definitely space for improvement. Synopsis: Not that captivating tbh. It lacks flare and doesn't really tell the reader why they should invest their time into the book. Would recommend rewriting the synopsis with a little more flavor. Writing Quality: One of the weakest points of the book. You have run-on sentences, missing punctuations, and capitalization errors. Would recommend using Grammarly to fetch these and also to re-edit the chapters. Story Development: Decent enough. The starting of the book isn't anything captivating. I believe the author might struggle a little with giving attention grabbers. Not that the book has no signs of potential but there isn't much to tell the reader to continue reading. The pacing is kinda slow early on but that's fine. Character Design: For a romance book, I think it's only natural you should describe your characters... At least a little more... Readers want to know how the characters look and what makes them attractive. Not that your characters should be flawless but it would add some color to the book. Overall: The book is R18 in the tags, yet it says General Audiences. Please fix that author. Truthfully, my original rating was 3.4 but I adjusted that to a flat 4 given that I'm unaware if this is your first novel. You might just lack experience so take the free points there. However, the book isn't necessarily bad. It's just flawed and I believe you have the writing potential to make it better. Passion is one thing but passion is wasted if not executed properly. Best of luck in the WSA and I'm sure you can secure a nomination if you are eager to learn and add more to your novel to make it as great as possible. Don't let this review get you down if it's not what you're looking for! Just take it as a learning experience and keep moving forward!!

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Yeah, don't worry. I'll do my best to handle it uniquely. I won't let it be a constant thing where every time he's in a tough spot, it happens