zennin

So, there doesn't seem to be a very detailed review so far, so I'm going to take this role. :D1- About the background, I don't remember to have seen a story where an entire universe was controlled by a single being. The MC, obviously for the sake of the plot, just so happens to be the only one free from that 'Queen's' influence. 9/10 there. It feels interesting.2- The world background follows your normal cultivation Universe... Until the systems activates! Yes, there is a system. From the looks of it, when it activates, it teleports the MC to other universes with different laws, rules, environments, etc. Simply put, this is a key content that allows the author to bring infinite numbers of environments. 10/10 there.3- Updating stability is what you would expect. Two chapters/day, and the occasional mass release. I wonder if there will be rewards and things like that.4- The development of the story seems to be going at a steady pace, it is not fast, nor is it too slow. Personally, I would like less darkness, but the comedy is very good and lightens the content. 8/105- As for writting quality, I haven't seen any glaring mistakes so far. But then again, with ChatGPT nowadays, authors will only post huge mistakes if they are lazy to use it. 10/10 until now.Well that's more or less it. I like the story, the comedy, and the development, so I'll continue to read and come back later to update it if necessary.

IS it true that this book is being written by two authors? It sure seems like your watermark of comedy, very high quality. If there is two to it, then I'm looking forward to the rest.

Quite a big first chapter. So, the MC reincarnated but wasn't controlled by those golden eyes. All lives in the Universe were under its control, and this is only one of the universes those eyes have influence. A word where everyone is possibly a potential enemy. Seems a good concept. Will continue to read and see how it goes.

This turned to be quite funny, and now a system... I wonder if the receipt will work. xD

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oh well...

may yes, no?

or at least I think

should be going up now

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