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I hope the story will be without homosexuality. He didn't even talk to Jaina as warmly as he does to Varian. Too saccharine. Too sappy. Too sappy. Turn down the sweet talk and eliminate it as much as possible in the dialogues between the guys. Such rosy dialogues just make me shrivel up.

I don't understand how this fanfic got such a high rating. The main character is a masochist. He is insulted, humiliated and mocked, and he does nothing in response. His wife, a psychopath, carries him around in her arms like a girl and dominates him in every way. It's so disgusting.

If you're interested in reading about a psychopath who kills people without reason in the first few chapters, this is the story for you. I'll probably skip it. It's too dirty, in my opinion.

Constant internal dialogues ruin everything. .............................................................................................................................

Because the prototype for the MC was a Finnish sniper, killer and fascist cocksucker, I give it the lowest rating. Showing scum like this as heroes is a very bad idea. Well, to put it simply, MC is a little cowardly, faggot chicken. Dumb and narrow-minded.

Another jerk from the Patreon site. Honestly, this is disrespectful to the reader and just disgusting behavior. P.S.: I won’t be too lazy to duplicate my review in the hope that such a bastard will delete his account.

Another jerk from the Patreon site. Honestly, this is disrespectful to the reader and just disgusting behavior. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Mr. Freeman.

After reading 70 chapters of the story, I couldn’t shake the feeling that I had been greatly deceived somewhere. I didn’t see any canonical characters or canonical events, just boring everyday life. There is no place for everyday life and teenage drama in cyberpunk; it is a cruel world in which you can only survive. I expected a cyberpunk story, but what I got was a snotty drama. I expected to see a reasonable and mature protagonist, but what I got was a stupid teenager and a pathetic henpecked character. Who likes to read about a degenerate with eighth-grader syndrome? Very disappointed.

The protagonist of the story is a typical omega character with inferiority complexes. This completely negates any merits of this story.