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yinumlia

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yinumlia read, write, tell. this is lia, English is not my first language so please bear with me >,< anyway, my first novel is now out for public viewing so please check it out!

2020-09-18 UnidoGlobal
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5.5h

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110

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  • yinumlia
    yinumliaa year ago
    Respondeu a Cynklope

    hi! sorry for that, been really busy recently 😅 anyway, im glad you like the story! I'll do my best to update as much as I can <3

  • yinumlia
    yinumliaa year ago
    Postado

    Really love how the story progresses. Not a big fan of transmigration theme, but this one definitely gave it some spice. The world background is well-designed and easily understood, and characters are uniquely described. It does not rely on the generic elements of transmigration and I commend the author for that.Also, the cover is absolutely captivating!

  • yinumlia
    yinumlia3 years ago
    Respondeu a Meg_Goodhope

    I will keep that in mind and try to fix it. Thank you so much for the review!

  • yinumlia
    yinumlia3 years ago
    Respondeu a Aeipathy_02

    Very much appreciated, I will do my best to keep this going. Thank you so much!

  • yinumlia
    yinumlia3 years ago
    Postado

    A great and worthwhile read! I added this to my library and hopes for more. I am no professional writer myself but in comparison to those books written by known authors, I can say this one is almost on the same level as those. The construction of words for narration and dialogues are very creative, making them easy to comprehend and entertaining to read at the same time. Action scenes were executed well through writing too. The world background was built and explained thoroughly, I see no flaw with that so far. I am loving the MC as much as I love her story, her attitude and everything. After all the encounters she had on her new life, her ultimate dream still stands firm on her heart. This novel is great, all about it is, I am looking forward to the progress and development of the plot. Keep it up!

  • yinumlia
    yinumlia3 years ago
    Respondeu a MicahDarkFantasy

    Thank you so much! I'll do my best to keep this up :D

  • yinumlia
    yinumlia3 years ago
    Postado

    The story is truly touching and quite relatable, being awaken from a fake utopia is my type of plot after all. Although I've seen lots of stories of this theme, this one's unique in its own way. The characters are portrayed to be realistic, as well as their actions but reading it is very entertaining. So, the writing quality is well and decent but I believe there are still room for improvement (purely from a reader's pov, I'm not a professional writer either). I suggest you add more descriptions to the dialogues or describe the current scenario in a more detailed manner, to aid with the reader's visualization. There were some grammatical errors but that's totally fine and does not get in the way of understanding the story (I myself commit that most of the time lmao but too lazy to check them), proof reading is the key, YAS. All in all, the slice of life genre was given justice to and that's a big thumbs up! The story development is good and I am looking forward to how it will progress further. Keep it up!

  • yinumlia
    yinumlia3 years ago
    Postado

    Such a unique and amazing concept for a plot. Each character's background stories are well-written and you can clearly see their different outlooks in life. The elements of drama, fantasy and comedy combines in a very neat and entertaining manner, a good point to note. There are just some technical errors but they do not get in the way of comprehension. The narration and dialogues are also decently written. Love the characters' and story's development, I highly recommend this one. Will be looking forward to how the story will progressively further. Keep up the good work!

  • yinumlia
    yinumlia3 years ago
    Respondeu a Akira_Monadelle

    Oh myy thank you so much for the kind words!

  • yinumlia
    yinumlia3 years ago
    Respondeu a SCARLETZEE

    Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my story, I'll give my best to keep it going. You too, best of luck on your writing journey!

Witch of the Throne

Art (cover) by zengjiayi on DeviantArt, Please support the artist, by going to this link https://www.deviantart.com/zengjiayi59 Trigger warning: gruesome theme, sensitive language and mature contents A hundred years had passed since the war against witches reached its conclusion, leading the Kingdom of Londeve to a century-long peace. Everything's all well either for the young village baker boy, Tristan who lives a simple life with his two younger siblings not so far away from the country's capital. As ordinary as he might seem, it is not to be expected that he's actually acquainted with the only living royalty residing in his homeland, Crown Princess Anne of Londevè. Even so, their decade-long friendship never brought any significant change in each others' lives throughout the years, and for the humble young man, it is something to be relieved for. However, fate seem to have its own mischievous way of twisting the humble orphan's life. It was a remarkable encounter that turned his seemingly normal life into a dangerous rollercoaster ride as he got involved with the epitome of misery herself — the manipulative and mysterious lady, Serina Lourdemayne, who has been ironically keeping the peace at the Kingdom as a substitute Queen despite being a witch herself. Will this accidental and unwanted engagement ever reward him? Will they be able to work progressively despite their obvious and huge differences with their loved ones, responsibilities and aspirations in line? Dive into the world of magic and witness the journey of Tristan and Serina together with the noble Paladins as they protect the Kingdom from the coming calamities and from the new enemies that could possibly be more powerful and sinister than the wicked witches the human race had faced before.

yinumlia · Fantasia
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