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Oh my The misuse of pronouns is making my head spin. So difficult to keep track …
An Ning?? She did she get there?
They keep referring to the two children as male and sometimes boy and girl. It makes me so confused.
What about Jaing Ran? Who is Jaing Qi
He “laid” on his bed
I cant Scroll pasT 142
Me Either!
Should it say admire rather than envy?
It reads as if written by someone that english isn’t their first language If that is so, hire a good editor.