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Rahmad_Syahputra093yrRespondeu a LynarizTrust issues boy
Nat sighed and took out a wood stick of approximately 12 cm and said "Arthur, we didn't want to tell you but now we have no choice. Your father and I are wizards. And wizards are special people who can do special things."- Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
Rebellion atau Pedang Sparda?
Bentuk pedang ini sangatlah bergaya barat seperti di game, jika kalian tahu maka itu akan seperti Dante Sword di DMC 5. Bedanya adalah warnanya ungu agak kemerah mudaan. - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
actually, you're doing exactly the opposite...
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Because the MC is am idiot and a virgin in his past life.
"Erm... Big sis Yang. I understand you have insufficient demon spirit coins, so how about a compromise. The payment will be every month for the next six months. The second and third month will be paid in the best pills you can refine, the rest with demon spirit coins. And since I greatly admire big sis Yang I would like to gift you three farms closest to the Alchemist Association. How is that?" Said Hong Yue Xian, while trying to keep his eyes focused on Yang Xin's face. - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
What a damn Virgin...
He had to give it to Shen Xiu, even though she was a vicious bitch, she was easily one of the sexiest women of Glory City. 'Damn! What a fine piece. It would be such a shame to let her perish with the Sacred family. I will save her and make her mine. Let's see if she can be tamed.' Hong Yue Xian could not help but grin evilly in his heart as he devoured Shen Xiu with his eyes. - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
Thor, Untuk Sistem Operasi pada gadget canggih itu, MC saya saranin gak usah dibuat bisa membongkar pasang sistem operasi gadgetnya... karena gak masuk akal aja. kita tau aja kalo sang MC sekarang hanya mendapatkan pengalaman buku komputer di masa ini saja.itu pun masih buku basic nya. Kalo author maksain Untuk sang MC bisa mengkotak-katik, saya saranin aja Untuk nanti pas sang MC mendapatkan Buku tentang teknologi IT masa depan biar lebih masuk akal.
Este capítulo foi suprimido. - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrRespondeu a PostLost
oh, I see... I just think to ride the yellow cloud you have to be pure I mean look at master Roshi he didn't have malicious intent but he still can't ride the yellow cloud. but it's okay that's your story. keep up your good work.
Realizing his mistake, he quickly thought of a lie. - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
i almost think this is based on Chinese version. Well that's something...
"That what I'm asking you" Yue and You has a similar pronouncing, and beside English isn't his first language. (This world is based on the translated version). - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
But, it will be different meaning if that quotes translated to Chinese. so isn't telling her that would be weird?
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery but today is a gift, that is why its called present " Zako gave a piece of advice from a person who experienced death and life. - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrRespondeu a samsara
I can agree with this
With a sneer Seth replied "What's good about that realm? that lass is really hard to deal with and I don't want to associate with them anymore." He said and murmured under his breath. "Really ungrateful, I saved her and she just left right after. I didn't even got kiss." - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
Cause you're an idiot... you let you're feeling to be the Best of you
Seeing Yun Che's fleeting figure Seth couldn't help but shake his head (Aaaah! Why did I even accept that brat.) - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
Thor, Untuk teknologi li-fi menurut gw Li-fi dibuat aja menjadi sebuah teknologi yg bisa mengolah cahaya menjadi sebuah Kuota atau sejenisnya untuk mengakses internet. Sayang Banget kalo gak bisa digunain Thor. Entar selagi cerita berlanjut... Teknologi ini bisa dibuat jadi bahan masalah. misalnya pas si MC ditempat gelap dan membutuhkan kuota. Author bisa ngembangin suatu masalah dari situ.
Este capítulo foi suprimido. - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrRespondeu a JoSauer
Welp... They can just say both political and love right?
She looked at him with disgust and said, "Little scum, listen well because I won't say it again. I'm the girlfriend of Xiao Yan, I love him and I'll do anything for him, if you dare to get in his way ever again, I won't hesitate to kill you, understand?" - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
if he can lie, then how can he ride the yellow cloud?
Realizing his mistake, he quickly thought of a lie. - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrRespondeu a cybercyclone
Just imagine Itachi have Naruto personality... A real F*ck*d Up...
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Gw Jadi Bingung banget dengan Pilihan Adam milih nih bocah dah.... Karma Baik apanya, dah jelas nih manusia Bejat banget... hadeuh...
(Ren:eheehee.. Eheee.. WahahahahhaH harem, akirnya aku memiliki harem ku sendiri..) - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
Cukup aneh Buat manusia yg karma baik berpikiran begini
Ren: sekarang langkah selanjutnya mari kita sapa dulu milf kita tercinta.. Ehee... Ehee. Ehe heheheh. - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
Blue: Author Impostor nya coeg!!! Dia Bunuh MC nya terus Di isekai ke dunia lain coeg!!!
Chapter 28 "Blue is the impostor!" (Rewrite) - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrRespondeu a Dfransginola
I saw you Killing Green!!! You're The Impostor!!!
Chapter 27 "you acting kinda sus" (Rewrite) - Rahmad_Syahputra093yrComentou
This mc is like naruto... stupid and naive...
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