Daoist_Coomer
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I actually prefer you make a new one, this one died or the hype and excitement died, this was actually super good but, should I reread it? no, I already know what happened so it's not that good no more, would the story become even better in the future? maybe, but in circumstances that your work does not get its support that it once was, it's unmotivating right? I feel for the author
The development is top notch, it's not too fast nor slow, I've read through the latest chapters and the grammar is goodthe The Oc is well developed and the right screen time for GM. Imo it could use a little more Detail on the Moves, but that's just me.I really hope this Stays, There is a Curse which is true , all KNB fanfics stop midway and leave us hanging. Good luck author
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