Raining_Flowers

A sword has a blade, but a blade is not necessarily a sword. Sometimes I use the word "blade" to talk about a sword, but you'll always know which sword (or any other weapon) I'm talking about.

He hadn't his sword, to begin with. It's sometimes hard to jump with a blade attached to your belt. It actually depends on how you land. + Eiji is actually not THAT drunk. He's drunk, but he still has a somewhat clear mind and is well-trained so jumps like that aren't that much for him. He drank some beers, but his drunken state comes more from the fact he drank fast than anything else, so this "drunken state" didn't last very long. I don't know if you got what I mean, it's like when you drink 4/5 beers in a row, you're severely drunk but not for THAT long because you were at the peak of your alcohol level.

Yes, she did die. But a quiet and painless death, unlike her mother.

Thanks a lot for this review! Writing things in a simple way is quite important to me. It allows me and the reader to concentrate on the essentials. But I still hope to improve on this point as, in my opinion, my story sometimes lacks liveliness!

Thanks a lot for this review! It makes me happy that you enjoyed the story :) I worked on the map for months, which allowed me to deepen my world-building. Eiji has only discovered a tiny part of his world. He has so much more to see!