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I have read other works of this author and she is phenomenal! I am so excited to see what happens with this story and how many different emotions I get to feel this time around ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I absolutely love her books and would recommend you to read them!!!! Keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapters💜
This book was written wonderfully the amount of observation the writer has put into this is commendable and I loved reading it! The start also seemed perfect and it was gripping and made me crack up at how relatable it was! Good work author bring us more chapters as soon as possible, can't wait to read more!!!
Thank you so much Author! I loved reading this, it brought back such a sweet and painful nostalgia. It was good reading about my childhood favorites again and yet it was painful reading about everything happening in Nederland. The language you used is absolutely brilliant and the story flows well I'd like if there would have been more dialogues but great work! Keep it up.
Well the story is quite interesting in itself. There could be a little more descriptions of the settings and emotions but it is doing surprisingly well without it too. I usually don't read this kind of story so I found it pretty unique and specially how similar it really is to an RPG game. It has a right balance of various aspects and I especially enjoy the humour in between. A little editing of punctuation and grammar could increase its standard to another level but besides that it's well written.
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