Morning_DawnStar

He’s doing this too much he should level up all his abilities at five and only check it then

We’re have you been?

I need this to be updated daily

Welcome back. Also, we are fine with one chapter a week don’t burn yourself out.

Start the journey already

Just start the Pokémon journey already. It’s frustrating to keep on reading home life and a Pokémon fanfiction, we came for the journey not eight years of staying at home

I thought he only had a larvitar Where did the Machop come from?

It was a good chapter but you didn’t really get a lot done in it. I would’ve preferred if you cut out the 90% dialogue and just went straight into the action. I really find chapters that just have a giant recap of what happened last chapter lazy writing.