Sammyboi241

Re-reading this story, and I see my own comment! Lolz

Little Silver!

Very good story, but the guy who wrote it is horrible at math, so just ignore any math mistakes.

Uhm, if ten years have passed…Sun was sixteen at the start 16+(~6)+10=32. Why is Sun still in school and a juvenile? Vampire?

Forgotten history, forgotten again.

He’s cultivating a powerful ally who has far more connections than him, one of the first smart things he’s done actually. Any good relationship has give and take. He’s already gotten his life saved by this guy calling in a favor, and he’s repaying it quickly which is also smart. Repay favors on your own terms or they may call them in later and be more than you’re willing to pay.

This is kind of what cultivation novels already do. Cultivating the body until it can output tremendous physical and magical abilities.

Did you forget the electricity is out. Milk spoils real fast without refrigeration. Even if you claim winter made it cool enough to preserve it for a while, it’ still been there for over a month. Gonna be real ripe at that point, not refreshing.

Unless of course you mean to say that in order to receive the blessing you have to be conscious for at least an hour on that day. In which case you need to reword this paragraph.

Not true. Idk what makes you think that, but regardless of when this GOD decided to do this, it’s going to be the middle of the night somewhere. There ARE going to be at least a billion people sleeping at that time regardless of your delusions. Also there are plenty of people just like the MC, who hate Christmas and everything it stands for. Or depressed people, or sick people, or injured people, or people that were working a couple hours prior, and have now fallen asleep. So the answer to your doubt is yes, yes you should have come up with a better explanation.