it feels quite clean thanks

To be honest I found this novel on FFN and read most of this on FFN

I do have a question obviously feel free not to answer but what volume will he be evolving or not if he ends up not also congratulations on hitting 700k words

but I suppose one could argue that it isn't a bad thing with her character but I found her actions in the recent volume quite irredeemable but that could just be me

I think the only complaint I can think of right now is that you have made nyarlathotep too irredeemable

I think Shinto and Egyptian mythology would be great but if you choose only one then I would be happy with either to be honest :)

I used a number generator 1 to 10,000 100 times and literally every single time it was above 1,000

Interesting

I think you mean Niece

it sucks it was dropped but I hope things go better for you :)

It's your story if you don't want her to be a background character make her one people will dislike choices you make no matter what choice you make

-100,000,000,000 She is probably the most overused character In any fandom she's a good character sure but very overused.

+100,000,000,000

Exactly, you can just wake up one day and make a minor decision that will spiral and in a month or so make a drastic change in your life (this reads like a mess but it's 11pm where i live and I'm tired sorry for it being badly written)

It would be kind of funny if he was 6 until the end unrealistic but still

Esdeath

I hope that Harry potter hasn't been influenced by the horcrux I just realised that is probably who he is but it's just so cliche

I think he is a year or two younger but I am probably wrong

I thought for a moment it could be Yog-sothoth