thank you, and i take no angreenes towards you, when i wrort this story i was just getting into writing. and thanks for reeding this story, it just came to me and i didnt really know what to write sometimes or had to much on my mind.

Nope there is not

Well its a pretty good story but way to much Politichs and way to lesss things about our main Charachter. It is in our main character's point of vive but everything is abiut his Grandfather and father. I know Orgin story is Importand as well as the devolpment, but this is, i dont know, its kinda pulled loong, to make the story loonger. So all in all, its a good story just way to many side Charachter details, or something like that.

Well i read the storry and must say i am a little disapointed, the story line is good as well as the idea behind it, but there are points in the Book that are sombly not explained, maybe going over some of the chapters will make a betterment. GOOD LUCK

Nope simly No, how the hek did you come up with that. You know i read the title and discription, sounded Interesting but then since the first Chapter there was Incesst and rape. YUST NOOOO. sorry😱

Nah Sorry the thing with Harry and his Aunt and a relationshipp, that may bee between them kinda put me of the story, simply No No Nooo, sorry...

Really like the book, grat story and what you did with Harry and Snape, i just love it[img=recommend]. I also like the devolpment of the whole story, just great.

Exactly that is what i mean, its kinda mean of her but she's his Mom, so i kinda understand why she did it🤔

I really like the storry the Charachter is great, till he turned into a stealing Rat(sorry for Language). It kinda dost match with the Noble and kinda nice but a little Daring Personality of Sean and it makes me sad. Also the devolpment between him and his Parents is first great but then there is the thing with the Philospher stone witch his Mom simply took away, even trouht it didnt belong to her and she had no right to do that. But i like the Background of him and the relation shipp he has with his Friends, he even is nice to some of the People he dosnt like. [img=recommend]

yes its my Orginal story

I dont really get the story devolpment and the many Charachters its kinda confusing, im german so english is not my main language😅

I like this story, but at middle it starts to get really cofusing, with all the perspective and new charackter. But all in all its a good idea and story.

The story in all is quite good but at the part starting by Lockhard it got kinda weride and it also was a little creepy, but a good kinda way. I like it, i would recomed it for other's to read.

well than, that's explain it, please if you want to criticize other's, don't just write trash by it but, an idea to make the story better or an idea to improve myself, like you just did.because no one understand's the simple word, "trash",simple i don't know what you mean with that, so thank you.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

not quite he was going to break them, later when he meets his father, then hes going to break them. I kind of forgotten to write that down there so....i do it later?

Life Point's

Sorry but i dont really like the story the beginning was interesting, but then you pulled this whole"Magic" thing trouht the mud and destroyes the wonder of Magic.

Yess i also hate her more than Voldemort

Im happy for you