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OneAutumLe4f

OneAutumLe4f

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I'm bored That's all Do people even read this?

2020-08-24 UnidoGlobal
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  • OneAutumLe4f
    OneAutumLe4f3 years ago
    Postado

    Excellent writing , really enjoyed the story telling . Rhe world building in this story is one of the beat ive read so far . Characters are written really well, they are mentally adapt unlike other fan fics where only yhe mc has intelligence. So far a fantastic read

  • OneAutumLe4f
    OneAutumLe4f3 years ago
    Postado

    Really good story. Mc is likeable and there is no unnecessary hate to Dumbledore or other characters . So far the story has remained close to the original behavior of characters and not totally change it , other than minor plot holes its a fantastic read

  • OneAutumLe4f
    OneAutumLe4f3 years ago
    Respondeu a Bob_Uchiha_XD

    Lol

  • OneAutumLe4f
    OneAutumLe4f3 years ago
    Respondeu a BlueDragon13

    No man it gets worse later on. I agree that it is good at first but slowly the author makes it disgusting by continuously saying that the mc is more feminine than even beautiful ladies. Spoiler . . Mc starts becoming a scum that trains a girl as a pet and justified it saying she was an enemy ( when actually he crippled her fiance ). All in all it gets disgusting and it genuinely disappointed my expectations on the novel

  • OneAutumLe4f
    OneAutumLe4f3 years ago
    Respondeu a Home_Sweet_0796

    Thnx saved a lot of time

  • OneAutumLe4f
    OneAutumLe4f3 years ago
    Respondeu a Evil_Dude

    Bruh , there are many novels that fit your preference you should read that. Not everyone likes the trope of killing anyone to survive , plus in the original story Naruto barely kills anyone.

  • OneAutumLe4f
    OneAutumLe4f4 years ago
    Comentou

    Lot of grammatical errors but awesome story so far

  • OneAutumLe4f
    OneAutumLe4f4 years ago
    Postado

    Great story writing, a well thought out plot , clear descriptions although in the latest chapters I wish that the mc would acknowledge the other characters a little more because they are unaware of their new circumstances but the mc is going through this the second time. If this is will change later for more plot then all is well But overall ONE OF THE BEST READS out there

  • OneAutumLe4f
    OneAutumLe4f4 years ago
    Comentou

    Noice