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After all he is the GOLDEN HUNTER. A man renowned for hunting those untraceable.

It's not the best story Il admit that. But boy is it So Stupid I love it. This story feels more like a unique take on the story in my opinion. The story is still a bit rough around the edges, but overall its pretty good.

This is a First Impression: Respect the Original content. From reading your comment/Review, this makes no sense. You could've just made a new book or story from this. NEW WORLDS, NEW CHARECHTERS DIFFRENT EVERYTHING!!! At this rate, just edit it and make it a new story. You have an idea, so work with it. Don't feel limited to the "Overlord" brand. Because from what I see you are taking a half step. Too diffrent to consider it even related to overlord, yet to scared to make your own story. This doesn't count as a Fanfiction. Its a whole another world. So drop the Overlord and make it your own. To me you clanged on to the "Overlord" brand for no reason. It's basically Click Bait now. From what is consider your hurting both the story and the people who actually wanted a Fanfic on overlord.

This is a First Impression: Respect the Original content. From reading your comment/Review, this makes no sense. You could've just made a new book or story from this. NEW WORLDS, NEW CHARECHTERS DIFFRENT EVERYTHING!!! At this rate, just edit it and make it a new story. You have an idea, so work with it. Don't feel limited to the "Overlord" brand. Because from what I see you are taking a half step. Too different to consider it even related to overlord, yet to scared to make your own story. This doesn't count as a Fanfiction. Its a whole another world. So drop the "Overlord" and make it your own. To me you clanged on to the "Overlord" brand for no reason, It's basically Click Bait now. From what is consider your hurting both the story and the people who actually wanted a Fanfic on overlord. (This is a First Impression)

That's because it doesn't Exist. World Savior is a World Item not a Class or Job.

Why do people have a solid 2 brain cells. stating that Everything could walk. He can't WALK! The entire point of him here is to learn the motor functions to walk. Being another race does not help this. Such as a Comment from before: A person wants to learn how too drive, but instead of driving a regular to practice, he drives a f1 car. Now he gets his driver license but as soon as he enters a regular car, he doesn't no how to drive it. Sure he can drive a "Car" now but it's all pointless because he doesn't know how to work a regular car. This is why he chooses the human race. Remember this is not you, this is a disabled person. So Congrats you just insulted a Disabled person trying to fix his Disability. You must feel AMAZING NOW!

You know when I first thought of a Prosthetic arm, Hassan of the cursed Arm came into mind. Just ZABANIYA!! And their dead.

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