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Good novel, although there are some grammar mistakes the story and concept look very promising!🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Hello there, thank you for reading my novel and to answer your question I would first like to point out that the absorb function rends the page which It was used on unusable for forty days, it was explained in Ch. 2 in the introduction page as Assimilating. I'll edit it into absorb. Alph was stuck in the forest with just two slaves, the orc and the draylion, since Dane was going through character development and when he joined Kane and the party he was very careful about using the grimoir in fear that they might discover it and it might cause a rift in their relationship. If you have read so far it should be clear that Alph never got the time and leisure to, unless my writing sucks and it does, try out the Absorb function. Now to the main topic, yes, Alph will soon be getting some power ups now that he is in a town and Dane, who is pretty OP right now, is at his beck and call. I hope I gave you satisfactory answer, thank you and please ask any question you have any time you want. I will do my best to satisfy my precious readers :)
Thank you! Yes, there are a lot of spelling and punctuation errors since I write on a cheap mobile phone that bugs a lot xD I will edit the chapters to my best. The cover is just some random image I found on Google edited with the novel title. I will commission an original book cover once I get some things settled :) I appreciate and thank you for your review ^^
Action✔ Blood✔ Gore✔ Vampires✔ what more could you ask for? It's a fight between good and evil but not your typical one. The MC and the other characters are very well written and so far it has not disappointed in what it promises to offer!
Noooo! poor child!
Thank you for pointing out the spelling errors, I will find some time to go over all the chapter to resolve it. I will strive to improve and not let the readers down.
Overall a decent isekai novel. it takes the famous cliches a bends it to create something new. However, there is just one thing I would like to complain, the pace seemed a bit too fast for the first couple of chapters. would have been great if the MC' s character was explained in a bit more detail but it's just my opinion.