Bill_Barrett

People who hate other's stories then write hurtful comments, then they can go write their own way. Oh I forget the just know how to hate not create. I love reading fanfiction, there are stories I love, like or just don't care for. But I don't judge their hard work with hateful comments. There is a reason envy is a sin. Keep doing what you want it's your story (I really like it by The Way).

I have greatly enjoyed reading your story so far and I personally can't wait for the next chapters . It's great how you link the character system into the flow of the story without it being the main focus and the character growth is also enjoyable. Keep up the good work writer.

Wow so far what I have read I have deeply enjoyed you have me wanting for more just to read about the reaction from the council and Ani's group. Thank you for your time and creative mind for this story.

I just wanted to say Thank you. Your story is something that I quite enjoyed. It has elements from two of my favorite themes. mcu and HP. Please finish this story, It's hard and disappointing finding a good story and it stops posting. Your has kept me entertained and wanting more.

Thanks for the chapters I have enjoyed read your story immensely. If people don't like what your they can go write their own fanfiction. Fanfiction is place for people to read and enjoy what others dream and write. It's not always perfect for fanfiction is a place to grow, not for instance classics if that's what they're wanting go to a library. Again thanks for giving us your story and please keep going till you finished it .

I just started reading your story and have enjoyed it immensely. Please keep it up. As the great one says.

This fic is different from what I normally like to read but what I have read I have deeply enjoyed and can't wait to read some more. All I have to say is don't give this story up and leave us wanting more but nothing else coming. Again thanks for you time and effort for the really satisfying story.

Cool to use of FmA l, M.a.s.h, and star trek names. I don't know how u writers come up with original names and make the fit the characters that u created. I don't second guess people who create, I just enjoy whatever I like,and I can say I am enjoying you creative work. Thank you for making my free time enjoyable.