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This is one of the best novels I've read on the platform, the pacing is good, the investment in the main character it gives me is nice, and the tension and build up of the story is amazingly good. All it needs is more chapters and a few grammar fixes here and there for me to call it a 5/5. Good job on this one Author I'm expecting more cool things out of this and from you, keep doing what you're doing 👍
It's not bad a few mistakes here and there, but it's well written, the plot isn't bad, and the unique plot device the MC was given seems interesting though it hasn't been fully explored yet, honestly it's only issue is that it likes chapters and the chapters themselves feel slightly short but not enough to were it's a glaring issue.
I've read better machine-translated A.I made novels, and the 'author' self-rated 6-7 times literally the only reason it's so highly rated lmao.
Theirs nothing in any of the comments though (With the link) Just talking about the link, you should put it in the Author's notes so it won't disappear. Webnovel might be deleting it thinking it goes to a competitor site or other business or scam or whatever =∆=
This has been a long time coming can't wait to see what Zent does with this novel after all ToS was great and with the year extra experience under his belt Zent will be able to do a lot better with this one. Still ToS is amazing as well. Anyway I know this is going to be a good one (that will also hurt my coin pouch)