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He accidentally kills something very scary and powerful, and we find out later. This is so much fun :)))

I liked the story. First I will talk about the things I liked, then I will talk about the shortcomings.The characters are well thought out. -The world background has an interesting and understandable layout.-The features of the system are well thought out and easy to understand. -The battle scenes are satisfactorily descriptive.Here are the points that I find missing.-It's a well thought out novel, but overall I found it a bit lacking in depth. Although mc has a painful and difficult past and says he can't trust people, he doesn't quite fit in.From my point of view, it would be more reasonable for a person who has been so hurt and bullied to be a little unstable when trying to get stronger for revenge.So I think a more wild personality should have come to the fore instead of unnecessary stuffing for it to be cool.I don't feel that mc has a completely distrustful image of the ducks chasing him according to his past life we ​​learned.I liked the novel overall, better than other cliche reincarnation system novels.

Honestly, I enjoy reading the novel.But I see the shortcomings of the novel and it saddens me. Personally, I think the author reflects his personal feelings too much in the novel. The side characters are well-constructed but not well-explained.World building and character stories are well designed and thought out I can only say that not all characters reflect their full potential.Even the system that mc has sometimes does not provide accurate information, for example, the total score is always in whole numbers and details are skipped.In my opinion, the author has a good imagination, but he cannot write this wonderful fiction and the world well because he has no experience.Although I enjoy reading the novel in general, I don't mind its shortcomings. Normally I think it would be better to give this novel 3 or 4 stars, but I give it 5 stars because I believe the author could do better.My only regret is that the author did not write this novel as a more experienced and advanced writer.Some people say that mc is unnecessarily overstressed and exaggerated, I agree with them.

From where?

I would say it's a fun read but that's about it There is almost no such thing as a balance of power.mc has a god-like ability in the beginning and it's so pointless.I can't even understand what it has to fight against in the future when mv has such an advantage.Even in my dreams, I wouldn't find such an extreme corrupt talent start plausible.Unfortunately, there is nothing to look at from an objective point of view.

It seems extreme that it is 50000 times bigger, but you can say that it is still extremely small compared to the sun, so I think it's not an exaggeration.I hope the episode lengths aren't as short as episode 1.

I've read this far and decided it wasn't bad. The worst part is that it moves so fast.I understand that it should progress quickly according to the scenario created, but the depth of the novel feels very lacking. It feels like only a few people have died, even though what has happened so far is so tragic and sad.I wish the negative life conditions of war and destruction on society were tried to be explained in more depth.In every age of war, people have serious food and shelter problems, children live tragic lives, and people are in misery.It's a shame that the novel treats this topic so superficially and focuses only on fast-paced battles.Whereas, writing such subtle and important subjects from a realistic point of view is the biggest makeup of a novel.This novel is fun to read, but that's all. certainly not an achievement that I can remember and appreciate in the distant future.I wish the author success, I can say that these articles were written from an impartial point of view.

Even though I'm not a huge TLM fan, I can say that this novel is uninspiring.It seems very interesting that mc travels to different worlds, but for some reason it does not give what is expected in terms of action and continuity.

What about sick people if mc can't get gifts because he sleeps all day? After all, how could he be the only one asleep?

When the main character learned that the world was too powerful even for him, his first job should have been to go to his family, no need to argue why. The ragged title he had acquired after all implied that he was the most powerful creature on earth. so it's not necessarily wrong for people to point out the author's mistakes. I think what makes a good novel is its depth, and although there are other good things in this novel, it falls short on depth.