Xephotor

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The grammar is near flawless and contains little to no error. Both the pacing and sentence flow are decent. The dialogue is excellent; it is easy to discern who the speaker. Each character carries their own presence and voice. The story development thus far is very good. It is captivating and leaves one looking for more chapters. The author has great potential and I look forward to the completion of the story.

The grammar does suffer a bit, but gets better as the chapters go on. The pacing is excellent. The sentence flow is near flawless. I’ll probably come back and study it a bit myself. The story is captivating and charming. It has the feeling of a fantasy novel while being grounded in a modern setting. The author has great potential and I look forward to the completion of the novel.

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The grammar is flawless with little to no error. Sentence and paragraph flow could be improved a bit, but that is a minor nitpick. The story is intriguing and draws one in. It has decent pace and won’t run one over with plot points nor get bogged down with descriptions of the second and fourth tree of a random mountain. Definitely worth trying at least ten chapters and thirty if one has the time. I hope the author will continue writing the story and I look forward to its completion.

Thee characters have great chemistry in this story. The author was able to give the characters their own distinct voice, which is hard for many writers to pin down. The story looks like it is about to get spicy and I look forward to how the author will develop it going forward.

The author paints an intriguing world with good descriptions of what abilities do. The story has many moving parts, and it will be interesting to see how the author manages them. There are very few grammar mistakes. Sentence flow could be improved, but that will improve as the author writes more. I look forward to the continuation of this story and hope the author will continue writing it.

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The grammar is good with almost no mistakes. The sentence flow is not the best. This makes the story a chore to read at points. I found myself skipping over some of the cultivation explanations. Nothing innovative that makes these cultivation sections worth reading. The story is well thought out. The book is generic at the beginning, but becomes an interesting read later on. I recommend the book for xianxia readers looking for a new novel. This also a decent book for those who want to get into xianxia and don’t want to start reading a 1000 chapter book. This story has nothing unique or mold-breaking that would make non-xianxia readers interested. With all that said, I personally look forward to new chapters.

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