PureBlood404

Thank you for reading, I will try to increase my pace and have consistent uploads,

yeah, how do they find such errors when the author himself can't find it.

Thank you for reading and supporting.

Thank you for reading and adding it your library. I hope I live up to the expectation you set.

can you give me some advice to make it less cumbersome? it would be helpful.

Not typically a fan of romance genre but I kinda want to see where it goes. Good story, able to hook me in the first chapter. Good luck writing!

Well written and quality writing. The story development and character design is good. The non-human mc brings a unique feel to the story. Good luck and keep writing.

thank you for reading, i will try to improve it.

for the first one, i am sorry, English isn't my native language and I have a lot to learn. the second one, I edited it and I think it's better now third one, yeah I will try, I mean I think it doesn't give the impact it gives if I break the paragraph, I will try in upcoming chapters don't worry you aren't rude, and thank you for your constructive criticism it helps me a lot

i have to give some context about the story and yeah, I didn't think about the certain magical index, it does give some vibes of it