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Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapter. I see your Space Marines and I raise you a shovel.

irst things first I just have to say wow. Being perfectly frank I was not expecting the story to be a little gem that instantly shot up to one of my favorite books on this site and I'm not even 30% done with the book. I would have to say the author does a great job with power balance, MC it's both weaker and stronger than the original at the same time. I would have to compare it to how Batman is both a weak and strong hero. If the MC is given enough time to prepare he could potentially reach one punch man levels of power with the help of Monica, but at the same time he cannot instantly cast multiple slip spells taking everyone out instantly with a silly spell like the original MC. So in conclusion I highly recommend this book. I would give it a 10 out of 10 Fire Nation would invade again.