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The most terrible thing in a harem is when the author begins to distribute heroines, the author, I'm sorry, but I don't intend to read this further

The author, throw off the link to the original, I will be grateful

For those who watched naruto and perceives Hinata as Naruto's wife, this fanfic is similar to the history of NTR, in that the MC in the guise of naruto allowed his friend to take her away.

Ophis, Kuroka, Koneko, Akeno

(Google translator) A good story, easy and pleasant to read, not annoying like most stories while reading, with all MCs (who are villains, manipulators, upstarts, etc.), here I like the character of the main character, then how he interacts with girls is also interesting, but it can still be improved a little (as an example, read "Long Live Summons", where the main character conquered the girls very cheerfully). There is nothing more to add, go ahead and do not leave this story, it is my favorite.

(Google translate) The idea in this story is good, but at certain points MC behaves like an inadequate person, take, for example, the scene when Rias's servants tried to contact him and invite him to talk, he even started scolding and insulting them (why?) It is quite normal that after this they wanted to beat him up and teach him a lesson (it is quite logical, other people in this situation would have done the same), from the actions of the MC it is clear that he himself went into conflict, but showed everything as if he was innocent, and try to intimidate him in every possible way (like the young masters in Chinese novels ghosts). Now another question, why does everyone have such hatred for Rias? In 7/10 of DxD fanfiction Rias is made an idiot and humiliated in every possible way, in 2/10 she is ignored or disposed of as a hindrance, and only in 1/10 MC has a normal romantic relationship with her. The way she shows herself in the original is quite normal for her status and what family she is in (9/10 people in her position would behave the same way, and possibly even worse, for example, like Riser or Diodora), in many other fan fictions according to others anime, too, there are often such cases, which depressing and killing the desire to continue reading.

In the last two chapters, almost all of the text is 90% of MC's thought spam. The author is already starting to overdo it.

I liked the plot, only too much "psychology" is associated with the main character, I certainly understand that this is necessary for the growth of the character, but it's already a bit too much with all this "psychiatry", as a "reader" - it's depressing to read, it's hard to continue, especially when you see how those who can correct the brains of the protagonist without any "suffering" sit, and do nothing. But otherwise it's okay, it's interesting to know what will happen next.