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Kakashi_PCB

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An author who enjoyed reading books and novels so much, he got addicted and decided to start writing novels.

2020-07-26 UnidoUnited States
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  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Respondeu a JBFIRE_77

    I'm unsure of what you mean by describing my MC. Personality? Appearance? Ideals? Regarding romance, at the moment, there is no big female lead that has been planned to be introduced. The novel will never have romance as a truly big, time-consuming thing, and I doubt that will change as I continue to write this.

  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Postado

    Hey Readers! The author here. I just wanted to get a few things out of the way. First, the book will probably start slower than some of the other novels on this website but trust in the plot development. Also, another thing to note is that I am a college student who does this for fun and enjoyment, so please be gentle with this poor author if any unexpected circumstances arise. As for questions regarding romance or harem, I will probably not focus on romance. If it somehow does make it into the book, it'll probably be a minor thing that isn't a main focal point and most likely not a harem. This is my current direction though I guess things can always change depending on how the story evolves. Please give this poor, small author some support or a nice review if you enjoyed the book and enjoy a nice picture from one of my favorite mangas. Author out.

  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Postado

    Honestly, the readability is top-notch and very fluid. The writing seems good, and the comedic/humorous moments are there. I am leaving a 4.8 for this review only because it seems that the chapters are not always daily. Nonetheless, this deserves a read! Recommended!

  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Postado

    A great book with excellent writing quality. The author seems to know where he is going with this as the worldbuilding seems thought out. Definitely recommend!

  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Postado

    A great book with great ideas. I loved the spiderman 2099 reference, as well as other things that make this story a very enjoyable read. I think this is definitely a good novel to check out and read. Leaving a 4.8 here with great expectations.

  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Postado

    Everything looks great. The writing quality is very high and readable. The characters seem developed and have a great amount of depth to them, and the fact action paced fight in chapter 1 was enjoyable. Leaving a 4.8 with great expectations for this novel.

  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Postado

    Like all my other reviews, let's talk about readability. I think this is definitely on this site's upper echelon of readability. I didn't really notice any grammar errors if there were, as it was quite fluid. This is definitely a good read!

  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Postado

    Not my type of genre, but the book seems well thought out and well written that you would have no problem readability wise! Recommend to at least give it a read!

  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Postado

    First things off, the Readability in the first chapter is a bit shaky, but it appears to get better chapter by chapter, which is good. There are a few grammatical mistakes or sentences that make sense but are missing or word or two, but honestly, nothing too big compared to some other novels I've seen. It seems the stability of updates hasn't been completely solid but still good enough. The story is very compelling however and can induce emotions out of the reader. All in all a good read!

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  • Kakashi_PCB
    Kakashi_PCBa year ago
    Comentou

    I think the "I never liked around" part is missing the "I never liked to be around".

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