Broseph69

I couldn't write with as many typos as this author does if I tried. It's actually impressive in a way. I would only recommend this story to my worst enemies. So that they might suffer and convulse in sheer agony from every single use of "in" being mistyped as "on" throughout the fic.

Absolutely amazing. It doesn't pointlessly rehash canon - just the bare minimum to understand how the Thing that is Sasuke feels or thinks about certain things. It also introduces new changes, a fair few of which are butterfly affects of this Sasuke different from canon Sasuke. Certain canon missions that may or may not have been skipped over due to the changes echo later on down in the story. They aren't forgotten or glossed over, contrary to some reviews I saw stating so.

'I hadn't eaten anything good in weeks that day.' Wait, how can it both be weeks and just a day?

Is it just me or is this intro too average? It should be more chuuni, something like becoming the supreme god or something?

Why would you post a spoiler for your own story like that!? At least give a warning bro!

He'll become the verb 'explore' that's specific to the corners of the world?

...What?

finf?