Remake your chapters with proper spacing and paragraphs. No one likes to read a wall of text

Stop delaying and get on with it

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This story was short and sweet. Great stuff I loved how it started and adore the ending. Thank you for sharing this with us.xdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxdxd

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I like how the story is being allowed to grow though I wonder if tom is going to face any serious does before the start of the mcu canon events ?

I love how unique the story is but I do believe it could do with a bit more world building and character depth. And the english while not the best is far from the worst I have had to endure on this site

The english could be better and the characters more fleshed out but overall it's an ok read if you ain't got anything to do and want something to spend your time on