Just trying this writing thing. Wish me luck.
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I have been creating a wiki as well as maps for the series but I have had to draw out some of the main characters. I will attach them here once I am done hopefully before the end of this month.
I'm Kenyan. Most of the names are in Swahili or other Kenyan languages like Luhya, Kamba, Kikuyu, and Luo. There are also Bugandan names (Ugandan language/ethnic tribe).
I really hate when they don't have the host's memories since memories are stored in the brain, not soul. But still a great start.
MC should join this Demon Sect as well. Clearly they are way more smarter.
Okay, the ending of this chapter actually made me laugh. I hope doesn't take this low-key stuff too far.
I hate how some MCs treat male and female villains differently.
Things pick up around chapter 20
This has a lot of potential. I read through both your works, at least 10 chapters and the writing quality is really good especially some of the dialogue scenes.
I don't usually read romance but I am intrigued with your work. I really liked the world background and setting as well as how the characters interact. There is some interesting things I did not expect in the first few chapters.
I'm intrigued