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the translation needs improvement and grammar. the story was great until you transitioned into a different world would have preferred if you completed the first world and then ended the story. but other than that I enjoyed reading it until the one piece arc
more chapters please how often do you plan on releasing chapters if possible 4 chapters a week is fine because I know that you have a life of your own some authors do one a week while I would like more chapters than that it's better than nothing. love your book and keep up the good work