PartyCannonPirate

makes sense it just it comes out of left field at the beginning so it threw me for a complete Loop but if that's the way you do things I'm not going to complain definitely makes things different

the Loose Cannon one didn't make sense to me I think it might be missing something in it

shouldn't she be suffering still from her social anxiety unless the main character has already finished her social link

then again she could have gotten it from the chat group system thing the time between your chapters are so long that I tend to forget details I love your web novel just damn is it take a while to see another chapter

gun shape device.....? invokers are only used in Persona 3 in 5 they had to rip off their masks for her though she didn't even have to do that

I'm not the biggest fan when they use brother and sister in this form of terminology it gives me too much cultivation novel vibes which I'm really don't like those kind of things and it really throws me off it this novel seems I could be good but that's just a major turn off for me I'm sure others can get past that and enjoy it sadly I can't

I hope you give some sort of explanation of why he's on the one magic night Squad which is mostly women and the very few men are nothing more than errand boys

did the comic book Avengers have her regularly a part of their team because as I know from the MCU at least she's usually out in space doing her own shit Intel called

so basically a clap based Marco Polo

shouldn't it be the Mind Stone because that's the stone that was in Visions body originally