PuddingLord

No problem, man. yeah, the story ain't bad, but the author didn't do it justice. In later chapters when something is really bad I do rewrite the scene but that is only late in book 1

I can look once this book is done on patreon

Thanks, hope you enjoy it.

I know, I changed it to archery later on

It gets pretty good later on. This book was written over a few years, so I think the first chapter was literary, the first thing he wrote.

what do you think will happen when he detransforms and that little bear is still around

I'll fix this

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I remember it to be

Thanks, it was such a good novel. Did you read the one that the author did before Nanomancer?