Paris_loe

Very Nice Story hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Are you Drunk or on drugs ??

________________________________________________________________ I really like this story. I hope it doesn't get dropped like most of the Star Wars Story's. Hope to read more chapters in the future. ______________________________________________________________

Exp

I really enjoyed the story, but the story development ist too fast for me . And sometimes I think the Mc get's thinks to easily. But I like that the system doesn't dominate the Story , it's something different from other ''System'' like Story's .

I really liked the fiction. The Store development is a bit slow but it has a lot of detail in the told scenes . The world background is taillight I don't know what to say about that . The characters where quite nice and I really like the change in emotion .

Very Good