Singer_Rozie

Awwhhh, well grab a box of tissues. It's only goin downhill. Hehehhe.

That's what I'm aiming for!

So, I love the world background, the system, the characters and how it's all put in place. But, there are a lot of Isekai's out there, and to be honest I think trying to make yours a bit different or even significantly different from others is going to work great. Also, there are spelling and grammar errors. If you want you can ask a friend that speaks fluent English to proof read for you, and give pointers/help out.

I love these kinds of stories, and honestly this is fantastic. >.> Dude, how did you come up with this? Anyway, love how you go into detail and expressions. Fantastic.

Thanks a lot!! Yeah, it's my first time writing something like this. So, I had a lot of people giving me pointers and choosing what was best for me took a bit of time.

Love the storyline and the detail you put into exterior. Maybe add more detail to faces and feelings, instead of saying the word try to describe it? Just a tip. I like it though.

I love the wording of each sentence, to me it gives off a satisfied feeling. Also, there are some typos here and there but, we all make those mistakes. Also, it gives off a medieval vibe off, for some reason.

Love the storyline, it's different than most novels to be honest. That's basically it. Cri. edhgfjetwfjdgjfjfhfdhjfdjhkjfnblkgbfljskebgjdsbgkjhdsb

Thanks so much! It means a lot. Oh, the ending. I have a lot of things i could do, and want too. Hehehehhehe.

Thanks so much!!!