Reuben_Sequeira

As a Man united fan, first time reading any story related to united, so one plus for me and up till now story feels good, hope this will be good in the future to, one issue i have with this story is when character is speaking please put "" so anyone reading this will know when the character is speaking and when other things are going on

lyon,sevilla,southampton,leverkusen

it is said "makings of a beauty" and not "a beauty" both have very different meanings. the former means she is cute right now and will be a beautiful girl in the future while the latter means she is beautiful right now

i recommend everyone to read the story,it is actually very good. the only problem i have with this is the grammar part,don't worry about that because while grammar is not the greatest,it is very easy to read

i like the story a lot at the beginning but started to hate the mc,even though this story has great potential and i actually like the story,i am dropping this because of mc,i hope the best for the author and i relly think this is a great story but i didn't like it,but i recommed others to read it

i really liked the story,grammar can improve significantly,but it is understandable to enjoy,my biggest issue with this story is i you haven't used "" when characters speak which makes it a problem when reading

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i'm bad at giving review so for a short review,the story is actually fun,this doesn't have the high iq ml and one who depends on his maid a lot.this is what makes this story good,for example for sometime the maid who does most of work is absent and the ml has to do all the work,comes to know how difficult the job was without her and appreciates her,this all development makes this story fun Now

dragonite and aerodactyl

dragonite and aerodactyl