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Ok. My bad when I stopped reading there wasn't any other chapter but I see on the next one he met the healer. In the end I gave up on the story, the English is making it hard for me to understand what is going on. The story seems interesting but I get confused too much reading it. I stopped at the first arena battle when he asked the old lady to go get stuff for saving her grandson. Good luck author.
Very good book currently at chap 7. Not sure how the story will unfold. I noticed the characters were waiting for the military to help them lol....In a carribean country? That's unlikely unless they have someone who has connections among them. So far so good, I guess the main things that can make the novel go sideways are the future interactions with the new team members (Amelia's boyfriend seems already like a future headache), how they get off the island, they find their families in the US and also kennen will most likely have to go to china to find his family. I guess all these elements can be future arcs of the storyline. Honestly the level of writing is pretty good except for some typo here and there but nothing major!! Also, I love that the "system" isn't prominent as in other novel. At this point it may have even been better if there was no system as it is not really giving them any advantage and it would make the novel more realistic. The downsides is that they wouldn't know anything about their powers and the storylines would be longer to make them figure it out. Hopefully you don't become a system junkie author. Good luck. Please try to increase the frequency of updates.
most likely the other one I think.
Author it is only chapter 198. You should find a way to build something here but try to incorporate a love triangle. It is Crete the most used trop on tv shows and drama but it works!! in keeping readers engaged and guessing who the lead will end up with. Like Harry Potter first girlfriend, last girlfriend, like the vampire diaries, etc. I feel like that is the next level in human relationship that most of the writers on this platform cannot master so they go the easy road and do harem instead of confronting the difficuties, confusion, doubts of love triangles. I feel like the way the lead is growing and maturing could be a good basis for that.
Thanks author . I like it when relationships are like in real life. you try with different people you think it may work out even if in the end It doesn't and you find that one person who has your back in poor or rich and with who you will build something. I feel like most of these authors have never been in a healthy relationship where the girl is no super beautiful and strangely enough only becomes interested in the guy because he is sooo OP. I mean anyone knows it is not true love. if they wouldn't have given you the time of the day when you were a looser than the MC shouldn't entertain them when he succeeds either. After all just look at Warren buffet wife.
@ChuYang Hello i just read the chapter where you were explaining about going on an hiatus. I hope you are feeling better. Thanks for the explanations, i was a little confused as to why the author wanted to save people so much, why he had a hero complex etc. And i realize that the root cause is deeper than i thought. I feel from reading the book and your explanation is that you are someone that loves too much, that care too much etc. YOU ARE NOT SUPERMAN. It is not your job to fix others, the world etc. It is actually a little narcissitic to think you have the obligation to save your family. There is that book called "Women who love too much" that illustrate abused women and the psychology behind it. And your character and you love too much. You can lead a horse to the water but not make him drink. Even jesus wasn't loved by everyone, even hated. Not even considered by is own family but more respected by outsiders. The only thing you can do is be there when your loved ones need help, to lead by example. Just remember that you are loved.