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In the great foreigner, there is the same problem with the "water" in the work.

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Quite a controversial work, well written, but the plot moves at the speed of a manhole cover. For a large amount of written text, almost nothing happened, many things do not need to be described in such detail, since this really kills all the dynamics, which already do not exist. Also, too much time is spent on secondary things, and not enough on the main ones.