BeINGIMMRTL

Escanor is the sin of pride. i think your mc would be suitable to be the sin of wrath. pride itself means control for escanor and the age is just a huge mistake. nobody with the right mind would take a 13 year old seriously.

i like your book so much that after searching for a long time and still not finding a book similar to this apart from primordial record i came directly to ask the author to recommend me one himself. so please do recommend.

i have honest opinion not on the story but on the name. "Legendary Traveler: By Earning Progress Points I will Become Supreme!" by Scotchty reads like the million other novels out there getting published every second of every day in comparision "Legendary Traveler" by scotchy or something else shorter feels like a novel with the potential for greatness just from the name. people judge the book by it's cover and more so for it's title and don't ever think they don't. first impressions matter.

please change the review to something else. This reads like a virgins plea to her first time sex

So bro you found any TLM fanfic worth reading?

the story as of chapter 40 is good. the character interactions requires a little refinement but the characters themselves are acting as they would have in a game only characters with prolonged exposure have shown personalities. this means that any character worth more screen time that one or two chapters the author has given a better personality than the regular cardboard cutouts. the story progression is also quite good. the mc personality is something i like, he is not some beta who goes after every female with a good looks like a dog. In-fact the mc is a no bullshit type of guy, if someone annoys him or has a annoying personality then he makes sure to clearly draw the line. the only negative thing in this novel is that nobody ever finds the mc mumbling his thoughts to himself, like he mumbles insult, plans and so much sh*t that already someone should have already found him out.

i just have a small doubt why does he need to say everything out loud? if it was for the skill then he could have simply murmured it under his breath. and why is nobody catching him when he is doing as so right next to them. other wise the book is excellent.

chapter?

read this novel in scribble hub there the author posts ai generated images of characters and places

its been a really long and they don't matter much in the large scale of things.