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Ok that make since because I was confused
Yeeeeeessssss finally
Honestly it’s a entertaining read but it should show more of what the system contributes to the mc and the village because if not you might as well say it’s not a system fanfic. Also I think you should show more of what the mc battle prowes or what abilities he has and just have him more In the story since he’s the mc since it kind feel like he’s a side character
He should get ranmaru dojutsu