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And thank you for taking the time to read it.
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Sorry for the late reply. I fixed it.
And thank you for reading my novel. Leave a review when you have the time!
What language is that, if I may ask?
Wow, incredible! Be sure to write a review when you get the chance!
Perhaps.
This story is on to a good start. The characters have conflicts that makes people feel sad and feel for them. Good enough at least. The depth of the story and characters are lacking a little, but not enough to put off the readers. There are spelling and punctuation mistakes, but it's not too severe to confuse someone badly. In the end, keep it up! The story is good so far.
The MC ranking up is permanent. On how he do it is different.