TooSexy4U

Good for you. I dont personally like It but can see why people would. 👍

Ahh yes never a DxD story without Rias bashing 😒

The sentences Is readable, but the grammar is not superb. I don't know what you expected its fan fiction there's no editors or nothing so i don't really mind the bad grammar. What I do mind however is making the characters OOC to meeting specific agendas for the author. No. The author made relationships with other characters feel forced. This basically follows canon so the world background isn't something to write home about. Anyways good luck writing author, but this wasn’t for me.

bro.BROOOOOOOOO. I normally dont respond to comments but you have the exact same opinions as me. Authors are so terrible at romance its actually laughable. If even the ones that do have romance ts still bad coz it's way instant they get in a relationship with no character development at all.

Yo do could you explain how a system novel works and how to make one? You seem knowledgable about these things and im new to Webnovel.