Grafian

Personally I am entirely against Harry marrying Arianne and becoming the Prince Consort(?) to Dorne. What's the point of having built up Avalon and the North if his loyalties are going to be divided and he ends up needing to spend most of his time in the f* king desert? Man just focus on building his magic school and stuff.

Pretty much this.

So... Why do you want to add her if you haven't read the source material, don't know anything about her personality, nor even found any other stories with her? Her character design isn't even particularly unique or anything?

Idunno when my prioirities got so screwy, but genuinely the worst part of losing my job and becoming homeless is not being able to stay subbed to your Patreon

did he properly cut it off? Because I can think of all kinds of fun things he could do with a severed 'Hand of Domination' or something. Also, hilarious that Meridia and Molag Bal, who have pretty much always been enemies, are working together because of one 'mortal'

Well... At least he listened to your commentary lol

nothing wrong with this chapter mate. Only Adam's edgelord impression was slightly cringe :p

Hope it actually sticks, but I'm not keeping my hopes up. I honestly love everything else about this fic, the only thing is dislike is your Hermione. And I genuinely hate her character as you wrote her.

Good to know that from her perspective Harry doesn't own the islands. He literally created them from scratch, but everyone is unilaterally equal in her eyes, so everyone that manages to set foot there is just as entitled to all his hard work as him.

Hermione in your fic really seems to have issues with absolutely everything. She's so judgemental and self righteous you could legitimately rename her Karen and I wouldn't even notice.