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Zedakos

Zedakos

Lv14
2020-05-17 UnidoGlobal
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos1mth
    Respondeu a Daoist093316
    Ch 53 Let´s go!
    God´s Eyes
    Urbano · HideousGrain
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos1mth
    Respondeu a King_soul

    It's Ai written

    Logan, with a deliberate movement, pocketed his phone, a veil of composure masking the inner storm the message had stirred.
    BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM
    Fantasia · PilgrimJagger
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos3mth
    Comentou

    It should be the other way around?

    However, it was quite good to use the sky as a bed and the earth as a blanket.
    Unstoppable Martial Arts: Starting from Attribute Points Allocation
    Oriental · Sad wind turns the sunset
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos3mth
    Comentou
    "Eldest brother and sister-in-law refuse to leave Spirit Creek Village; I can't force them. The only thing I can do is leave these pills behind."
    Unstoppable Martial Arts: Starting from Attribute Points Allocation
    Oriental · Sad wind turns the sunset
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos7mth
    Respondeu a chaz_mars

    Jason is a character all on his own.

    Europe was the center of civilization, having the strongest economy with many states and even several kingdoms. The politics here are naturally so complicated that anything can happen.
    Returning From The Magic World
    Urbano · Dark_Crow1111
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos9mth
    Comentou

    I almost choked on my food reading this!

    Hearing the question, Leo burst into laughter. He thought of his old world and pranked them, "Well, probably. Considering that the Dao of Florida is eternal and their will lives within me, you can say that Florida is the land of gods."
    Florida Man's General Store in Cultivation World
    Fantasia · DamnPlotArmor
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos9mth
    Respondeu a Abloec

    I tried to fix some of them, but I keep missing them. leave a comment whenever you come across one, and I'll fix it. The later chapters are fixed, lol

    Este número foi suprimido.
    Feral Fury
    Fantasia · Zedakos
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos9mth
    Respondeu a zxjan08

    Bro, my nephew brought up the same thing a month after I started writing, and we had a laugh about it. It's too late to change it now, and I kind of like it, lol.

    Feral Fury
    Fantasia · Zedakos
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos9mth
    Respondeu a Rumtwist

    Will be Updating two chapters tonight.

    Ch 60 The Weeping Angels I
    Feral Fury
    Fantasia · Zedakos
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos10mth
    Respondeu a commander_pride_21

    So far It is a very basic class with three skills. All the beginner classes are. however, I am not going to give more info since it'll be a spoiler.

    Class: N/A
    Feral Fury
    Fantasia · Zedakos
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos10mth
    Respondeu a Sapper

    Thank you for catching this. You know, even after double and triple checking the spelling and grammar, there are always more that can be found, and I appreciate you all pointing them out so I can fix them. Cheers!

    A Tough Battle- Part I
    Feral Fury
    Fantasia · Zedakos
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos10mth
    Respondeu a jomenvist

    I seriously had that scene in mind when I thought of an owlbear for him to fight. lol

    Satisfied with his meal, Adam mentally confirmed his readiness for the next fight. As the gate opened once again, a massive four-legged beast emerged from the shadows. Its imposing figure stood four feet tall and three feet wide. The creature had a head resembling a huge owl, while its body was shaped like a bear. Its brown fur was interspersed with feather-like protrusions on its forelegs. The beast's paws resembled a bear's, but its claws were elongated and reminiscent of bird talons. If Adam were to give it a name, he would call it an owlbear.
    Feral Fury
    Fantasia · Zedakos
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos10mth
    Comentou

    It's been a trend through the whole story. he just let everyone and everything treat him like a doormat. it's like the author is purposfully creating this image that he is a spineless fool who can't make any decision by himself. If I were the head of that Ambrose family, I would have noticed all of these by now and would deem him super unfit in any managerial position.

    He breathed heavily and closed his eyes tightly.
    INSTA MILLIONAIRE
    Urbano · Amit_Agrawal_0888
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos1yr
    Postado

    I hope you all enjoy this work. Please feel free to write your honest opinion and let me know where I need to improve in my writing.

    Feral Fury
    Fantasia · Zedakos
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos1yr
    Postado

    I am going to be very harsh on this one. This is one of the worst novels I have stumbled upon. The author seems like someone who has zero imagination. The dialogs between characters feeps like its forced and bland. The Smut is the worst part of it. feels like a 10 year old who had just learned about what sex is wrote these scenes. Overall, I think the author should stop writing and maybe read a few novels first to see the differences.

    Ranking System
    Fantasia · BrighterThanBlue
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos2yr
    Respondeu a I_S_Rift

    gotta give it to you mate. The beginning is very much copy of A mages cultivation, but in later chapters you started changing everything and adding your own story which I like. wish you could release more than one chapter a day though.

    She nodded, a sad smile on her face. "You mother and father aren't dead. I don't why she told me to tell you that, but she said they would know, and it was for your own safety so I played along."
    Aether Beasts
    Fantasia · I_S_Rift
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos2yr
    Comentou

    ok I have to say. The author is copying A Mage's Cultivation series story which is written by Bruce Sentar. It feels like the watered down version of a good book. I recommend everyone to read the original first! they are on audible and **Adult** material.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
    Aether Beasts
    Fantasia · I_S_Rift
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos2yr
    Comentou

    okay!!

    "As we have decided before, we will first go to the Edna Charm laboratory," I said, and Elina nodded. Edna Charm laboratory is one of the places where resin had been found, and the person who had found it was not able to get deep inside me due to the dangers it had.
    Monster Integration
    Fantasia · AnWan
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos2yr
    Comentou

    paah~ paah~Paah~ only reminds me of special times. atarting to read this chapter made me think that I skipped some good sauce lol

    *Paah!~* *Paah!~* *Paah!~*
    Divine Emperor of Death
    Oriental · Stardust_Breaker
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  • Zedakos
    Zedakos2yr
    Comentou

    somebody be dying soon lol

    Ch 1642 Vast Sky Emperor's Visit
    Divine Emperor of Death
    Oriental · Stardust_Breaker
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