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It's Ai written
It should be the other way around?
Jason is a character all on his own.
I almost choked on my food reading this!
I tried to fix some of them, but I keep missing them. leave a comment whenever you come across one, and I'll fix it. The later chapters are fixed, lol
So far It is a very basic class with three skills. All the beginner classes are. however, I am not going to give more info since it'll be a spoiler.
Thank you for catching this. You know, even after double and triple checking the spelling and grammar, there are always more that can be found, and I appreciate you all pointing them out so I can fix them. Cheers!
I seriously had that scene in mind when I thought of an owlbear for him to fight. lol
It's been a trend through the whole story. he just let everyone and everything treat him like a doormat. it's like the author is purposfully creating this image that he is a spineless fool who can't make any decision by himself. If I were the head of that Ambrose family, I would have noticed all of these by now and would deem him super unfit in any managerial position.
I am going to be very harsh on this one. This is one of the worst novels I have stumbled upon. The author seems like someone who has zero imagination. The dialogs between characters feeps like its forced and bland. The Smut is the worst part of it. feels like a 10 year old who had just learned about what sex is wrote these scenes. Overall, I think the author should stop writing and maybe read a few novels first to see the differences.
gotta give it to you mate. The beginning is very much copy of A mages cultivation, but in later chapters you started changing everything and adding your own story which I like. wish you could release more than one chapter a day though.
okay!!
paah~ paah~Paah~ only reminds me of special times. atarting to read this chapter made me think that I skipped some good sauce lol