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The plot and characters are amazing. I enjoyed reading the book. My suggestion is to smash the length of the paragraphs a little bit, because there were places where I got tired while reading. Keep writing!

While I was reading, I realized that I was absorbed by the novel. This is a very important detail for me. The fiction of the characters and the narration of the world further increased my desire to read the book. I like your book and I am adding it to my collection. I wish you continued success

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I really liked the flow of the book. The characters are well introduced and the plot is very well designed. Although there are some grammatical mistakes, I really liked his book. I will stay in pursuit. I added it to my collection!

Thank you so much. Keep reading!

It is a wonderful language of expression. While reading, I felt like I was in the story. The fiction and the world are pretty well worked out. In summary, I really liked this novel, I strongly recommend you to read it.

Thank you for your valuable opinion. Keep reading!

Thank you very much for your valuable opinion.

You need to improve your grammar. Other than that, the plot and characters of the book are pretty good. While reading, I constantly wonder about the rest. I mean, read the Book patiently and you will be absolutely satisfied.

The plot and characters are very original and encourage me to continue reading the book. It is not a book that can be grasped properly, so keep reading patiently. I liked it very much and will continue to read.

Normally I don't like these kinds of novels. But I chose to add it to my collection :)

The narration of his book is very good, I enjoyed reading it very much. Normally, I would like to mention the shortcomings of the writers for their development, but I could not see your book incompletely. I liked it. Keep writing!

Thank you for your valuable comment. I will consider your suggestions.

I like this story, which has a very interesting subject. The characters are nicely introduced and enjoyed reading. But the language of expression must be developed. A book that will definitely take good places in the future.

Thank you. My grammar will improve over time. Keep reading I won't disappoint you.

Thank you!

The plot and progress of the book is really good. These are things we all know. I want to mention the missing places for the author to improve himself. First of all, I had a hard time understanding some places where the writing language could be improved a bit. You can examine the events in a little more detail in the book. If you can correct these deficiencies in time, your book will definitely be ranked one day.

While I was reading the novel, I was constantly wondering what would happen in the next chapter. The language of expression definitely deserves appreciation. I cannot comment on language knowledge because my English is not perfect. The best part of the novel is that you bring a different perspective to mythology. It is definitely worth reading. I just broke points from update stability.

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